Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Haiku's

Emily
4/23/13
Haiku’s
Winter
snow covered hills
mountain peaks are wide
cold fingertips

Modern
ring ring beeeeep
silence fills the air
no words come

Open nature
freshness fills the air
hears childrens crys
brush of green

Towering trees
green mountains out my window
wind whistling

Fresh mountain air
river outside my window
ripples in the water
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7 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 23, 2013 at 8:47 PM

    Great job! I liked the first and last ones a lot!

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  2. Madison's Blogg!!April 24, 2013 at 1:42 PM

    really good yem! I like the modern one the most:)

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  3. Greta BishopApril 24, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    Nice Gem I like it. I like the modern one.

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  4. NoaApril 24, 2013 at 2:07 PM

    "fills the air" and "outside my window" appeared to be very officiant for you!haha!

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  5. Mr. VackApril 24, 2013 at 2:11 PM

    great haikus. double check "children's cries"

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  6. Kate McleodApril 24, 2013 at 2:21 PM

    i like how you focus on specific details

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  7. UnknownApril 25, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    recount the syllables. other than that good

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